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| Image by Michael Maier, German surrealist |
Joy
Oneness
Melodic dreams
Heaven's serene symphony
Wash ashore these troubled times
Let mind, body, spirit unearth your fear
Hypnotic wings in harmony sing
Fly on high transparency
Transform
You, me
One
@laurie kolp
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{Prompt inspiration and image: Writer's Island}
13 comments:
Love the shape of this poem! It's like it has wings!
A great sense of the mystical in this. Lovely.
Pretty on the page, and pretty good poetry!
Uplifting words. Thank you,
Elizabeth
I like the shape of this; is it a particular form?
Thank you... no particular form (that I'm aware of) it just came out that way.
I like the way it came out Laurie...thanks for sharing
The final three lines clinch it for me.
Beautiful words, beautiful arrangement of them.
This flows beautifully.
well done.
love the prompt image.
Enjoyed this one. Very ethereal, but realistic as well. And positive. Leaves you with a very good feeling about life and the universe. Thanks for posting.
Simply beautiful!
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