Feel the shade
of red flush away
bitter scorn
blushed cheeks
the rose wine
on longing lips-
the tangle
of our limbs
intoxicating.
@laurie kolp
3WW- feel, shade, tangle
Poetic Asides prompt 184- Unexpected
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19 comments:
i love the languid urgency of the poem; it slips down the throat.
making up can certainly be a pleasure..i love the blush of red running through the lines..thick as their desire..jae
as the tangle of our limbs...intoxicates....
yum...delicious intimacy in this one...
I could honestly feel the heat in this one....nicely done
nice....not sure which is more intoxicating: the wine or the tangle of limbs!
very hot poem you can feel the urgency and the desire,
Ooooo.... I feel like saying 'Yessss'
LOL A tangle of limbs...
Very hot, sizzling. Lovely.
Very descriptive. Great job.
The picture of the tangled passionate bodies is so clear and made my head feel quite dizzy. Beautifully written.
"Making Up"? This should be called "Making Out!"
Excellent, economical and erotic - how many things can you say that about?
intoxicating indeed..short, sensual, and ensnaring
An economy of words that evoke so much! I especially like the tangled legs!
Enjoyed this, Laurie. Well chosen words well placed! I read it on two different levels.
beautifully sensual, laurie.
Wowzers, like hot eggs on a griddle! Sizzling.
you bet it is really intoxicating... mmm...
JJRod'z
GORgeous! We aren't fans of "make up sex," but I just might have to pick a fight with Lex if this is the result, hee hee. Loved the unabashed sensuality of this, Laurie. Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/07/18/life-without-limits-sun-scribs-3ww/
wonderful poem Laurie. In fact, all the July poems seem particularly fascinating. Its a pity that you no longer link your poems for Monday Toads or Poetry Pantry as frequently as before. Its great to read again your signature style with its profound depths and powerful passionate expressions. the take on the Devil was quite humorous as well. It indeed is remarkable how so many of you keep responding to prompts with such excellent poems.
Gently, insistently sensual. Nice.
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