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Oh wow, what a tribute to the victims of that terrible event.
creepy and dark!
It is such a tragedy when one man's twisted psyche is give free reign on the lives of the innocent.
Yes, this is one of those devils in human form. What a horrific tragedy.
Excellent, Laurie!
Very vivid ...
Devilishly good, Laurie.K
Way to make it dark and current....I have no idea what goes through someones mind that would make them want to do something like this.
Shudder. Kind of goes with my poem . . . this kind of violence feels supernatural in its randomness. . . just like its randomness fit a pattern.
Wow. This is superb, Laurie. Thank you.
I love acrostics, Laurie. Thanks for being part of my challenge today!
beware the light bringer!
What a tragedy--but I like the strong short form of this. No other words needed.
ugh...what a horrible act...i was listening to it and reports as we were driving down today...is there no end?
Lots of power in very few words. Nicely written!
Your brevity bites as those bullets...sharp and unrelenting. Great write, Laurie.
It does plant the seed that perhaps we're never safe..certainly portrays devilish actions.
What a creative response, Laurie.
Well said, Laurie....on the radio news all afternoon, they were talking about why automatic weapons are even AVAILABLE to people.
ugh.
What a timely prompt coinciding as it did with the tragedy in Colorado. How to explain evil doing? I think your poem hits a mark or two.
Powerful acrostic ~~ well done!
So well done, tight and perfectly dark.
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Oh wow, what a tribute to the victims of that terrible event.
creepy and dark!
It is such a tragedy when one man's twisted psyche is give free reign on the lives of the innocent.
Yes, this is one of those devils in human form. What a horrific tragedy.
Excellent, Laurie!
Very vivid ...
Devilishly good, Laurie.
K
Way to make it dark and current....I have no idea what goes through someones mind that would make them want to do something like this.
Shudder. Kind of goes with my poem . . . this kind of violence feels supernatural in its randomness. . . just like its randomness fit a pattern.
Wow. This is superb, Laurie. Thank you.
I love acrostics, Laurie. Thanks for being part of my challenge today!
beware the light bringer!
What a tragedy--but I like the strong short form of this. No other words needed.
ugh...what a horrible act...i was listening to it and reports as we were driving down today...is there no end?
Lots of power in very few words. Nicely written!
Your brevity bites as those bullets...sharp and unrelenting. Great write, Laurie.
It does plant the seed that perhaps we're never safe..certainly portrays devilish actions.
What a creative response, Laurie.
Well said, Laurie....on the radio news all afternoon, they were talking about why automatic weapons are even AVAILABLE to people.
ugh.
What a timely prompt coinciding as it did with the tragedy in Colorado. How to explain evil doing? I think your poem hits a mark or two.
Powerful acrostic ~~ well done!
So well done, tight and perfectly dark.
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