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| Under Windsor Bridge, 1912, by Adolphe Valette Courtesy of The Mag |
grounded, the man
bides time
caramel fog the layer
of descent
hope, a bridge
to heaven
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| Under Windsor Bridge, 1912, by Adolphe Valette Courtesy of The Mag |
24 comments:
Delicious caramel fog...
Ooo... Very deep. Hope a bridge to Heaven... Loved that caramel fog too :)
Well done! I like the idea of "Hope a brdge to Heaven"
that's very hopeful!! most people got depressed or at least negative about this pic
under windsor bridge senryu
sometimes you have to bide that time for hope to break through...smiles...
Beautiful. The waiting.
Indeed hope IS a bridge to heaven, I think.
Don't know which I like better: the idea of a caramel fog, or the concept of an actual bridge to heaven.
I think this is my favorite magpie today.
I LOVE this:
"caramel fog the layer
of descent"
AMAZING.
What a pensive Mag you have written here...
oh really very deep.....
yes caramel fog - so nice
Caramel and hope do go together!Nice-
Beautiful poem ... simply elegant.
(caramel cremes my downfall)
descent hope.... to heaven. Great imagagery
Caramel fog - wonderful description.
Love that caramel fog...
=)
Hope the runway is reopened soon !
I am totally stuck with the man in the caramel fog!! So sensual. I love the traveling aspect, that could be an airport and I love your brilliance. Thank you for sharing, Laurie.
I agree with Eva - and now I have a craving a caramel sundae...
You captured the allure of fog for me. Excellent!
A most delicious fog!
Delicious - love the caramel fog and the bridge of hope...
I like the bridge to heaven. Beautiful poem.
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