ARCHIVES.....FIRST DRAFTS.....
Friday, December 7, 2012
My Christmas List
Dear Santa,
Clothes might be nice,
Pots and pans to drum,
A remodeled kitchen,
For my iPod, tunes to hum.
But, really...
Enough space for all the poems
I'd like to write next year,
Health, abundance for us all,
A daily attitude of cheer.
Merry Christmas!
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Prompt inspiration: Imaginary Gardens- Words Count with Mama Zen- Christmas list
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23 comments:
This was well done in 50 words, with a rhyme scheme thrown in for good measure.
Bravo!
I need to re do mine...
I will cause Toads to turn red...
I love yours :D
Very good Laurie! And a very Merry Christmas to you!
Very good Laurie! And a very Merry Christmas to you!
And we will be waiting to read all the poems :-)
Oh, absolutely! I love the rhymes.
You even managed a rhyme scheme in 50 words. Way to go! I'm looking forward to all those poems too! Merry Christmas, kiddo.
Hurray! I imagine this on a Card for the season with a picture of you and your loved ones and a Bronx cheeer for Hallmark.
a daily attitude of cheer...that would not be a bad thing at all...smiles...def looking forward to those poems...have a great friday laurie
I raise my glass and say "cheers"
Health and an attitude of cheer. Wonderful!
You nailed it, Laurie.
K
Laurie! So well said... love what you'd like. :)
Yep, yep...daily attitude of cheer...I'm adding that to my list.
So very well done! Thanks for the peaceful smile.
Cheer - a perfect gift! Now to find a box for it!
Health is one of the most important things. And cheer is definitely a high priority as well!
A great list...Merry Christmas!
Merry Christmas, and keep those poems coming!
Hope you get them Laurie!
Like this very much indeed. Says all that's needed.
Have a great one!
space? to be creative? hope that's not too much to ask! ;)
What a great list! I kind of think all your poems are gifts to the rest of us.
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