Friday, December 7, 2012

My Christmas List


Dear Santa,

Clothes might be nice,
Pots and pans to drum,
A remodeled kitchen,
For my iPod, tunes to hum.

But, really...

Enough space for all the poems
I'd like to write next year,
Health, abundance for us all,
A daily attitude of cheer.

Merry Christmas!

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Prompt inspiration: Imaginary Gardens- Words Count with Mama Zen- Christmas list

23 comments:

Kerry O'Connor said...

This was well done in 50 words, with a rhyme scheme thrown in for good measure.

Ella said...

Bravo!
I need to re do mine...
I will cause Toads to turn red...
I love yours :D

Other Mary said...

Very good Laurie! And a very Merry Christmas to you!

Other Mary said...

Very good Laurie! And a very Merry Christmas to you!

Green Speck said...

And we will be waiting to read all the poems :-)

Mama Zen said...

Oh, absolutely! I love the rhymes.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

You even managed a rhyme scheme in 50 words. Way to go! I'm looking forward to all those poems too! Merry Christmas, kiddo.

Susan said...

Hurray! I imagine this on a Card for the season with a picture of you and your loved ones and a Bronx cheeer for Hallmark.

Brian Miller said...

a daily attitude of cheer...that would not be a bad thing at all...smiles...def looking forward to those poems...have a great friday laurie

Margaret said...

I raise my glass and say "cheers"

Kay L. Davies said...

Health and an attitude of cheer. Wonderful!
You nailed it, Laurie.
K

Hannah said...

Laurie! So well said... love what you'd like. :)

Poet Laundry said...

Yep, yep...daily attitude of cheer...I'm adding that to my list.

Peggy said...

So very well done! Thanks for the peaceful smile.

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Cheer - a perfect gift! Now to find a box for it!

Mary said...

Health is one of the most important things. And cheer is definitely a high priority as well!

Susie Clevenger said...

A great list...Merry Christmas!

Eva Gallant said...

Merry Christmas, and keep those poems coming!

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J Cosmo Newbery said...

Hope you get them Laurie!

Dave King said...

Like this very much indeed. Says all that's needed.
Have a great one!

Marian said...

space? to be creative? hope that's not too much to ask! ;)

razzamadazzle said...

What a great list! I kind of think all your poems are gifts to the rest of us.