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| Supermoon 2013, Julio Cortez, AP Pic prompt courtesy of The Mag 176 |
She flew
to the moon
and back
in one night,
the flight
a liberty--
consequences
unknown.
Chance
enhanced
white dust dreams,
pink clouds--
nonchalance
the blush
before
descent.
24 comments:
a beautifully adventurous dream, a poem that says more each time i read it... and that i'm loath to leave
love this, Laurie.
Very beautiful.
i bet you felt like you flew there and back again this week...smiles...the flight a liberty, consequences unknown...like that part laurie...
Beautiful and dreamy words.
A trip to the moon on gossamer wings, just one of those things...
lovely words to match a lovely image.
The blush before descent! great !
I enjoyed reading this aloud! The words tripped so well off my tongue.
white dust dreams,
pink clouds--
dreamy words to go with a picture full of hope.
I really like that consequences are unknown...Dream on, my friend!
She has a turbo charged broomstick , for sure ,...
what a trip i would have been...lovely.
May she safely land.
Lovely...sometimes you have to take that chance...
This makes one think. Incredible writing...
half a moon
Simply beautiful.
A perfect, creative, and succinct response to this prompt.
Needless to say, I liked it.
=)
Brought the dream to life with your stream
Love the 'blush' touch to this. It works great.
what a lovely fantasy....made me smile...thank you
A lovely Magpie, it leaves me feeling like a fairytale feeling lived well.
Wow! I love this fanciful trip that is so liberating! Well done, Laurie!
I really like the lines
'the flight
a liberty
consequences --
unknown.'
They make me feel like this was a joyride that was so exhilarating !
'white dust dreams'
enchanting line, beautiful poem!
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