Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Who Is She?

She parks on grass
Amid the front lawn flower bed
She parks on grass
A monster truck with such an ass
That stops in tracks, turns people's heads
Entraps with webs of silken thread
She parks on grass

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@laurie kolp

Prompt inspiration: Imaginary Garden with Real Toads

13 comments:

Mary said...

Excellent, Laurie. I am going to have to give that form a try. You have me curious about this person.

Eva Gallant said...

I love this!

Kerry O'Connor said...

This has a wonderful depiction of super-confident womanhood in it. I love it.

Old Raven said...

Well done.

The Gooseberry Garden said...

lovely wonders.

Marian said...

hah. i can hear her roar!

Robert Lloyd said...

I can envision red neck neighbors who annoy with this rondelet. I am currently dealing with the ones who keep parking in front of my mailbox so taht he mailman angrily skips our house. Big Ass indeed lol.

Cad said...

What a fun one, Laurie! lol

Ella said...

I, too can see the big ass truck...lol
Fun one; you did a great job~

Sherry Blue Sky said...

"a monster truck with such an ass"...my town is full of them. Really enjoyed this one.

Mike Patrick said...

They become more and more fun, Laurie. I love seeing you turn lose and rev ups some laughs.

vivinfrance said...

great fun, Laurie. That's inspired, to rhyme grass with ass, whether pronounced with an upper crust English long a, or a northern English short a! I

Jinksy said...

Great!