With a whiff of whimsy
and wild whispers,
the gray wolf swept
one warped woman
into his warm embrace,
whooshed away webs
of shadowed woe
as they waltzed
through life.
©laurie kolp
Prompt inspiration: Imaginary Gardens - Imagined by Marian Sinead O'Connor's The Wolf is Getting Married"
15 comments:
I love how you used all the words beginning with "w" It appears the warped woman needed a bit of the wild to bring her peace.
whoa and wow. watch out! :)
wow, well done...I love all the w's
It read like a waltz, beautiful :D
I SO LOVE THIS!!!!!!!! I need to find me a wolf!!!!
Sherry speaks my mind! w-w-w-wow! such a comforting sound, "The Wolf Gets Married" indeed.
It would be neat to have a stanza from the point of view of the "warped woman" too.
This is a snappy reply to the challenge - I love the clever alliteration.
Alliteration is a fun approach to take, here, Laurie. Whoopie!
def got a fun rhythm to it laurie....all the allit....and i hope they keep waltzing...dancing is def fun...smiles.
Wanting to waltz and while away but be wary for woes of wolves. Nice4 write Laurie!
Hank
correction: Nice write Laurie!
Hank
Waltzing through life, not a bad way to live...
Loved all the tongue twisting 'W's
I know I would LIKE this wolf!!
the gray wolf swept
one warped woman
into his warm embrace,
Love this!!! Great to echo that "w!"
Wonderful! Love the alliteration, helps to carry the story through. I can really identify with the image of a warped woman...been called that a time or two!
Wolves waltz? I see they have been done wrong by one too many fairy tale! :)
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