Monday, April 11, 2011

Magpie Tales Monday



Her Only Hope


Judging eyes bargain:
to see the truth at last
awaken, step out;
a quantum leap
from fish to fledgling.

18 comments:

verseinanutshell said...

I love it! Keep it up!

anthonynorth said...

Deceptively deep words. Excellent.

Isabel Doyle said...

that would be a leap ...

honeyhaiku said...

This concise in works, expansive in thought.

LKHarris-Kolp said...

Thank you!

Old Ollie said...

"quantum leap" - always

nice tight poem

Jinksy said...

Fish to fledgling is more than a leap - it's a miracle! LOL

Emily Young said...

Love it! I hope she makes the leap...

Martin H. said...

Something evolutionary going on here.

izzy said...

Nice ! thanks for visiting-

Mary said...

From fish to fledgling - unexpected, and that of course is good!

versebender said...

The truth will set you free. I liked your artful take on this concept. Am I to assume the wine facilitated the process? vb

LKHarris-Kolp said...

Escalated it, really.

Tumblewords: said...

I love quantum leaping - it speaks to momentous events. :) Perfect!!

Reflections said...

Concise, yet thought provoking... nicely done.

Trellissimo said...

In vino veritas?

LKHarris-Kolp said...

Yes... 'in wine, truth' (had to look it up).

= )

Vinay said...

beautifully versed and thought provoking! :)

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