Touch
me there
and
I will
pounce on you
like
a cat
clawing, hiss.
I feel your tongue
caressing,
tease me
dip
tasting
creamy pie;
resist
the
urge to
cheat.
@laurie kolp
I can't believe you have such a dirty mind! Come on now... pies, dieting...
Prompt inspiration: Imaginary Garden with Real Toads where Kerry challenged us to try out the Waltz Wave form.
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12 comments:
Oh, yes, pie.
And cake.
And cookies.
That's the only kind of cheating I do.
Kay, Alberta, Canada
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Laurie ... you have just discovered a new diet. The Poet's Diet. Every time you wish to cheat; write a poem. I love it.
Laurie,
Hissing and clawing! Gosh! He would'nt dare to cheat. Powerful verse!
Hank
I guess this is all about cheating on one's diet... I can relate!
I'm glad you gave this form a go - it has a great energetic flow.
LOL! I like it.
Like you would even need to diet!!! You're funny. Love this poem.
I'm afraid I have a dirty mind! lol
Cute! I wish I had some pie right now!
Oh,right, pie, of course! I knew that's what you were talking about! Now pardon me while I get a cold glass of water (to wash down the pie!)
So clever. And now I want pie.
But the other is some much fun! And no, possibly even negative, calories.
Dirty mind you? Never!!
Dirty mind me? Never!!
Wonderful write? Yes! For sure.
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