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Mesmerizing flames
within the hearth
crackled as I
tried to warm my back,
then ease into the chair
for full effect.
You watched me
from the wooden bench,
fingers resting
on the ivories,
palms on edge
of desire as you
seduced me
with your eyes
caressed my breasts;
the piano came
to life with a
metronomic
symphony.
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Prompt inspirations:
The Mag 146
29 comments:
Wow ... lovely !!! Amazingly conveyed. I kind of flowed along with your words.
Powerful and sensual.
That eye might mesmerize me in another way, I think it's creepy!
oo delicious....love the fire...open flame is def a romantic thing...the music...and then of course the physical intimacy...whew....smiles.
Ooooo.... nice and sooo romantic :)
very sexy!
Loved this Laurie--your sense of the prompt was just great!
Excellent.
And all that because of Chopin...
Like your perspective here!
Wonderful take on the picture, Laurie.
Couldn't be better!
...I think more than the piano came to life! :)
Fire and music- the perfect start,
and romance ? even better!
well done Laurie
A lovely poem, Laurie-- we share a wave length...xxj
Love this interplay of firelight, music and desire :) Eyes say so much don't they.
Love the sensuality of the piano here...wonderful...
This flows beautifully!
Perfect, I love it
I'd like a recording of this piece..encore, indeed!
Dolce et molto rubato perfectly expressed.
seductive and introspective in a delicious way.
This reminds me of the movie The Piano....lovely writing Laurie! :-)
FOR SURE
For sure a beat
can run up heat.
I say, if not
it is not hot.
You took me with you, every word of the way. Moving.
a lovely symphony!
Passionate! :-)
Time as the essence of passionate love !, why of course, thanks Laurie, you dived deep for this one
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