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| Photo by L. Kolp |
Do you see the pattern?
Doused with sprouts
of swirly fluff
~naughty words~
I've had enough!
They don't make sense,
no tense (some dense).
Overused, a pale
defense against
ShAtTeReD poems,
prolific forms
from whence; do you
get my drift?
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Prompt inspirations:
3WW~ douse, naughty, pale
Poets United Verse First: Patterns
29 comments:
well done Laurie
Arghh, for some who is colour blind your picture sent me cross-eyed. The poem is brilliant. A great combination.
I love how the poem and the picture work os perfectly together. Great work as always Laurie :)
ha. your words are a swirl unto themselves....kinda like how form feels to me at times...smiles....
Ha, I especially like the swirly fluff covering the naughty words. Nice illogical logic here. Smiles.
i get your drift! this made me smile, loved it and all 3 prompts into it? well done!!!
Your form is fun to read... I tried it aloud really fast and rather slow. The effects were surprisingly different. And I totally agree with the foul language sentiment. Sometimes it's the only way to really convey. More often than not, an easy shock effect.
This is fun ... loved it !!!
Yes, it makes sense to me. Well done.
Loved this art project (the photo and the poem make this a project).
Love your idea of the swirl of words and also I like the photo. I am wondering where it was taken.
The best sense often comes out of non sense..
"of swirly fluff
~naughty words~
I've had enough!"
I like this.
Great poem ... what a challenge combining three prompts! :)
There's definitely a connection between the poem and the photo! Nice!
The illustration was quite a test (yes, another color blind fool). I thought I would read it backwards as well and it was just as much fun. Then even better was to read every second line and then return back again. You played with us so I got hooked and became inventive.
awww I really enjoyed this :)
Such fun with words, extremely clever and enjoyable.
wow. laurie - good deal. serious with a lryical swirl, with a hint of satire.
The photo is intriguing.....love "shattered poems, prolific forms". Right now I havent a word or a form to my name. Just sooooo tiiiiiired!
A fun piece. I enjoyed the rhymes. )
Yup, loud and clear Laurie! Me like.
Wonderful words!
Love this, Laurie!
Nice play of words
Ha. I'm smiling 'cause I have such trouble with form. Well, not trouble really, I'm just too lazy to try any fluffy form. Your poem - not fluffy at all, just fun. Thanks Laurie.
Definitely get your drift :-) You had patterns in the photo and your words. Wonderful
great work love the photo
Poem and photo hand in hand. Perfectly fitted to one another.
Blessings
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