He grew great
ire when his
plan did back-
fire, a chortle/
churtle engine
fire enough
to taste smoke
for a little bit-a
while; embarrass-
ment to drive him
wild, in the woods
a hideout knot; a
knock a mile wide
his hurt pride.
*
Prompt inspiration: 3WW~ backfire, embarrass, taste
14 comments:
Nice momentum on this one--and yes, I can identify with the feelings!
Very well done with the emotions !!!
This will be singing in my head all day! Of course I'll be looking for hideout knob! Ha! Ha! Ha!
Well done
He'll get over it... :)
The woods are very useful. Try to keep one nearby whenever possible.
Campy and offbeat; well done.
ha...i really like the way this sounds coming out the mouth laurie...lots of fun rhyme...and hey no reason to get embarassed, it happens you know...smiles...
Delightful!
A little embarrassment is the least of what could go wrong.
Great use of three words. Please read my attempt.
Loved the alliteration in this piece.
A wonderful word portrait here!
was reading this in tune:)
Wild child, indeed.
Loved the cascade of the form, and it read as though the thoughts were tumbling out, with all the impatience of the subject. Great write, Laurie! Amy
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