We rode our bikes into verdant fields
of tomorrow, our future as bright as
the diamond on my left hand, then
at night we made love under a starry
sky and cuddled in our tent like
bears hibernating in winter's frost.
@laurie kolp
Inspiration: Open link at Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
14 comments:
A really like a three-line stanza and often think they are not utilized enough. This was perfect.
this is precisely the kind of intertwining of personal and natural that i was inquiring about!beautiful.
oh great big green sigh. also, extra points for verdant! lovely.
This is absolutely delightful, Laurie. From the bright future to the cuddling bears, it is a treat.
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel
Awwww...such sweet romance.
I love the feel of this one, Laurie ...
Ohhh very nice!
short and sweeet.. i like that verdant fields and hibernating in winter's frost ~
beautiful ~
Sounds good to me. Really good.
sweet!
I didn't know bears did that when they are hibernating! Cheeky things, but good luck to them. Fine, fine poem.
A beautiful poem, beautiful memory.
Sigh. So lovely.
"verdant fields of tomorrow"
wonderful poem, Laurie! ♥
dani {formerly haiku love songs}
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