Sunday, September 2, 2012

Dessert

Summer Night, 1913, by Albert Bloch
Picture prompt from The Mag 133 



A blue moon,
hands in pants
absurdity, obscure
(per)chance when
ghostly demons come
to play swirly, curly
pleasure points, a milky
dream-like cherry stance.

31 comments:

insanebloom said...

Pretty poetry...loved cherry-stance..

Anonymous said...

There's seems to be some sexual innuendo in your poem... am I correct or do I just have a dirty mind?

Kay said...

your poem totally summed up the picture.....sensual...sexy...delicious..xx

Grace said...

Looks like a tempting dessert ~

flipside records said...

I love it! Especially the ending:

"to play swirly, curly
pleasure points, a milky
dream-like cherry stance"

flipside records said...

I went back to reread because the comments were talking about the sexuality. I totally misread "hands in pants" as "hands in paints." :) I was picturing myself painting on the kitchen floor. I love to paint with my hands. :)

Brian Miller said...

haha...hand in pants....what is it getting all swirly and milky there? smiles....

DCW said...

Very sly but never dry.

Daydreamertoo said...

Oh, this is sooooooo naughty! Too funny coming right behind the *S**T one... haha
Very clever!~! ;)

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

Fun read.... Cool!..

JJRod'z

christopher said...

tasty

Tess Kincaid said...

Yummy! I had blue moon on my mind last night when I chose this...

Eva Gallant said...

Definitely a sexual bent here!

She Writes said...

Devilishly sensual humor here :). Who'da thought? ;)

Lyn said...

Love the swirly demons at play..quite a spell you weave!

Ritva said...

You gave me a completely new POV on this image. Well done!

Green Speck said...

A delectable read :-)

Linda said...

I love all the colors and flavors of your poem, Laurie. So delicious, and I thank you for sharing! =D

Helen said...

This dessert is as delicious as they come!!!

knightsheart said...

Hands in the pants .... Cherry stance. Loved it. That blue moon is a wonder

Wayne Pitchko said...

very tasty Laurie.....thanks again for sharing your words

Karen S. said...

Oh so very cherry-like and dreamy, indeed!

rch said...

So sensual yet enigmatic, much like the painting and very original as usual.

Dave King said...

Delightful.

Ginny Brannan said...

Your word choice, interesting. It describes the image seen, but with an evocative sensual twist mixed in. Very cleverly penned!

manicddaily said...

Wonderful to think of moon with hands in its pants. k .

robkistner said...

...like singing Laurie, full of whimsy, mildly wicked -- loved this... :)

Kutamun said...

Of course !, chocolate bar as seen on a molecular level , it all makes sense now

Chris Lawrence said...

A tasty sensual morsel love it

Tumblewords: said...

Delicious!

my heart's love songs said...

really enjoy your take on the prompt, Laurie! LOVE it!