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Sounds like an enticing invitation!Three Foreign Tongues
and rattle my appetite...haha....love it....and that brief moment of peace right before...this was fun laurie...smiles.
'That look of rapture in your eye'! A flawless description of a romantic moment.
Shake that rattle! Yes!
Fresh, intriguing, delightful...
Great, passionate depiction of desire. Why wait, indeed?!
Shake, rattle and roll!!
Haha... hungry ...for love... Nice! :)
Delicious! :D
Why wait, indeed! Getting right to the point!
very straight forward and heart reaching
Well done, kiddo. The poem, and keeping that sparkle in his eye:)
Ha ha! Joy, I'll bet!
Aha ... passionate :-)
Yes, why wait! Two endearing hearts together. Sensuously beautiful Laurie!Hank
Great words for the imagination.
hmm I get a feeling with the look in their eyes, they aren't going to wait long ;)
Who could pass THAT up? Nice.
Excellent passionate expression, if life could only catch up to our imaginations. Great write thanks.
ooOooo...sweetly HOT.
what a delightful write....smiles....
"why wait?" an excellent question.
love the ending!
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Sounds like an enticing invitation!
Three Foreign Tongues
and rattle my appetite...haha....love it....and that brief moment of peace right before...this was fun laurie...smiles.
'That look of rapture in your eye'! A flawless description of a romantic moment.
Shake that rattle! Yes!
Fresh, intriguing, delightful...
Great, passionate depiction of desire. Why wait, indeed?!
Shake, rattle and roll!!
Haha... hungry ...for love... Nice! :)
Delicious! :D
Why wait, indeed! Getting right to the point!
very straight forward and heart reaching
Well done, kiddo. The poem, and keeping that sparkle in his eye:)
Ha ha! Joy, I'll bet!
Aha ... passionate :-)
Yes, why wait! Two endearing hearts together. Sensuously beautiful Laurie!
Hank
Great words for the imagination.
hmm I get a feeling with the look in their eyes, they aren't going to wait long ;)
Who could pass THAT up? Nice.
Excellent passionate expression, if life could only catch up to our imaginations. Great write thanks.
ooOooo...sweetly HOT.
what a delightful write....smiles....
"why wait?" an excellent question.
love the ending!
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