Friday, October 19, 2012

Focus

 
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Capture the white light inside you.
Focus on its brilliance.
Snap the moment in time.
Store it in a peaceful memory.

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Prompt inspiration: Imaginary Gardens A Word with Laurie

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19 comments:

Daydreamertoo said...

Beautiful.
When we find that we do have that light inside us, it opens up a whole new world too, doesn't it Laurie?

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

Beautiful write Laurie!

Kerry O'Connor said...

Such a sense of peace rendered into words!

Eva Gallant said...

Lovely...if only we could all find our inner light.

Old Ollie said...

nice one - I enjoy the peaceful feel of this poem.

Patricia Anne McGoldrick said...

Laurie, I like the idea of capturing that moment to save for future! Always great to have some of these moments in our store of memories.

Herotomost said...

So much harder than it sounds sometimes. Beautiful Laurie...loved it.

Brian Miller said...

nice...i think we have to surround ourselves with the good memories...too often though it is the bad ones we let haunt us...

Kay L. Davies said...

Beautifully done, Laurie.
I agree with Brian's comment.
K

Hannah said...

Laurie...image and words...perfectly complimenting...so well presented. Beautiful!

Green Speck said...

You really did it beautifully !!!

Margaret said...

To find a way to hold peace within... :)

sreeja harikrishnan said...

woww...beautiful....!!

Dave King said...

Dynamite, that first line. Beautiful verse.

Grace said...

A lovely meditation Laurie ~

kaykuala said...

That's right Laurie! Focus on something great in us and savor its goodness. Fantastic!

Hank

Kim Nelson said...

The brevity of this piece delivers a sense of serenity. Ideal for the prompt.

Marian said...

nice!
though at first i thought it read
"copyright the light"
and that didn't seem quite right :)

Mary said...

I love 'snapping the moment' and saving for another time! This would work for me.

(Sorry I am late doing your prompt..but my tardy response is now linked at Toads!)