Beautiful. When we find that we do have that light inside us, it opens up a whole new world too, doesn't it Laurie?
Beautiful write Laurie!
Such a sense of peace rendered into words!
Lovely...if only we could all find our inner light.
nice one - I enjoy the peaceful feel of this poem.
Laurie, I like the idea of capturing that moment to save for future! Always great to have some of these moments in our store of memories.
So much harder than it sounds sometimes. Beautiful Laurie...loved it.
nice...i think we have to surround ourselves with the good memories...too often though it is the bad ones we let haunt us...
Beautifully done, Laurie.I agree with Brian's comment.K
Laurie...image and words...perfectly complimenting...so well presented. Beautiful!
You really did it beautifully !!!
To find a way to hold peace within... :)
Dynamite, that first line. Beautiful verse.
A lovely meditation Laurie ~
That's right Laurie! Focus on something great in us and savor its goodness. Fantastic!Hank
The brevity of this piece delivers a sense of serenity. Ideal for the prompt.
nice!though at first i thought it read"copyright the light"and that didn't seem quite right :)
I love 'snapping the moment' and saving for another time! This would work for me.(Sorry I am late doing your prompt..but my tardy response is now linked at Toads!)
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