Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Why Wait?


There you are
with that look
of rapture
in your eye.

I know
the calm comes
before you
throw me on the bed
and rattle my appetite.

Why wait?

*

Prompt inspirations:
 3WW- calm, know, rattle
Poetic Asides- Question poem

23 comments:

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Sounds like an enticing invitation!

Three Foreign Tongues

Brian Miller said...

and rattle my appetite...haha....love it....and that brief moment of peace right before...this was fun laurie...smiles.

JonnyM said...

'That look of rapture in your eye'! A flawless description of a romantic moment.

21 Wits said...

Shake that rattle! Yes!

Berowne said...

Fresh, intriguing, delightful...

Jeff said...

Great, passionate depiction of desire. Why wait, indeed?!

Altonian said...

Shake, rattle and roll!!

Daydreamertoo said...

Haha... hungry ...for love... Nice! :)

Anonymous said...

Delicious! :D

Unknown said...

Why wait, indeed! Getting right to the point!

Sheilagh Lee said...

very straight forward and heart reaching

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Well done, kiddo. The poem, and keeping that sparkle in his eye:)

Susan said...

Ha ha! Joy, I'll bet!

Amrit Sinha said...

Aha ... passionate :-)

kaykuala said...

Yes, why wait! Two endearing hearts together. Sensuously beautiful Laurie!

Hank

Old Egg said...

Great words for the imagination.

Anonymous said...

hmm I get a feeling with the look in their eyes, they aren't going to wait long ;)

Mary said...

Who could pass THAT up? Nice.

Anonymous said...

Excellent passionate expression, if life could only catch up to our imaginations. Great write thanks.

Anonymous said...

ooOooo...sweetly HOT.

Sreeja said...

what a delightful write....smiles....

RMP said...

"why wait?" an excellent question.

Unknown said...

love the ending!