Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Why Wait?


There you are
with that look
of rapture
in your eye.

I know
the calm comes
before you
throw me on the bed
and rattle my appetite.

Why wait?

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Prompt inspirations:
 3WW- calm, know, rattle
Poetic Asides- Question poem

23 comments:

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Sounds like an enticing invitation!

Three Foreign Tongues

Brian Miller said...

and rattle my appetite...haha....love it....and that brief moment of peace right before...this was fun laurie...smiles.

JonnyM said...

'That look of rapture in your eye'! A flawless description of a romantic moment.

Karen S. said...

Shake that rattle! Yes!

Berowne said...

Fresh, intriguing, delightful...

Nico said...

Great, passionate depiction of desire. Why wait, indeed?!

Altonian said...

Shake, rattle and roll!!

Daydreamertoo said...

Haha... hungry ...for love... Nice! :)

festivalking said...

Delicious! :D

Eva Gallant said...

Why wait, indeed! Getting right to the point!

Sheilagh Lee said...

very straight forward and heart reaching

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Well done, kiddo. The poem, and keeping that sparkle in his eye:)

Susan said...

Ha ha! Joy, I'll bet!

Green Speck said...

Aha ... passionate :-)

kaykuala said...

Yes, why wait! Two endearing hearts together. Sensuously beautiful Laurie!

Hank

oldegg said...

Great words for the imagination.

dandeliongirl01 said...

hmm I get a feeling with the look in their eyes, they aren't going to wait long ;)

Mary said...

Who could pass THAT up? Nice.

seasideauthor said...

Excellent passionate expression, if life could only catch up to our imaginations. Great write thanks.

Paige said...

ooOooo...sweetly HOT.

sreeja harikrishnan said...

what a delightful write....smiles....

RMP said...

"why wait?" an excellent question.

Robyn Greenhouse said...

love the ending!