Loved your poem - I completely appreciate this ... if you'll indulge me:
"Once I Had A Secret Love"
She unwraps me and imagines a new lover
my cool dark hard bittersweet soul meant to tease and savor
she breathes in my heady scent and remembers her first time and she is transported again and again and again to my narcotic netherworld
seeing no one around she teases me gliding me over her pink pillow lips my soft edges tickling her and eliciting a conspiratorial smile I bask in her worship and glow in her love her fingertips are warm and I begin softly melting from the desire coursing through her
she places me on her tongue so warm and slippery and I brace myself for the slow steady force of her bite
the pressure is divine and with one snap I am broken and swimming ecstatically in her mouth
I giggle helplessly as she rolls me left then right then presses me up against her palate
and I am singing to her an unrestrained Yes
she gently tosses her head back and I begin that long lovely descent down her waiting alabaster throat
and she feels me rushing and tingling through her whole being
with another bite I happily and shamelessly surrender crying breathlessly
yes! take me! consume me! give me my reason!
and suddenly my chocolate wrapper lies empty and discarded
Be still my heart! You chose to write about the candy, syrup, ice cream, pie, cake, etc. I simply cannot resist! Give me caramel or give me (caramel) death!
What a fine line is drawn between a secret love of sweets, and a secret lover! Perhaps we all unconsciously identify one with the other... But are all too guilty to admit it. :)
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The taste buds are dreaming... :)
Your lover must be so flattered.
oh my...caramel is def a delight...smiles.
Loved your poem - I completely appreciate this ... if you'll indulge me:
"Once I Had A Secret Love"
She unwraps me
and imagines a new lover
my cool dark hard
bittersweet soul
meant to tease and savor
she breathes in
my heady scent
and remembers
her first time
and she is
transported again
and again and again
to my narcotic netherworld
seeing no one around
she teases me
gliding me over
her pink pillow lips
my soft edges tickling her
and eliciting
a conspiratorial smile
I bask in her worship
and glow in her love
her fingertips are warm
and I begin softly melting
from the desire
coursing through her
she places me
on her tongue
so warm and slippery
and I brace myself
for the slow steady force
of her bite
the pressure is divine
and with one snap
I am broken
and swimming ecstatically
in her mouth
I giggle helplessly
as she rolls me
left then right
then presses me up
against her palate
and I am singing to her
an unrestrained Yes
she gently tosses her head back
and I begin that
long lovely descent down
her waiting
alabaster throat
and she feels me
rushing and tingling
through her whole being
with another bite
I happily and
shamelessly surrender
crying breathlessly
yes! take me!
consume me!
give me my reason!
and suddenly
my chocolate wrapper lies empty
and discarded
but I am
complete
for I have been united
with my beloved.
...this isn't so bad!!!! I want more :)
Wow...people are really guilty about the sweets today!!!! lol. All I have to say is yum.
Never has eating candy sounded so sexy!
I think all of this food talk is a way to avoid the really guilty pleasures that we still cannot discuss.
totally agree with Susan here, but still, yum yum.
This brings to mind the Milky Way candy bar with the all-caramel filling! Double yum!
I love your poem - and Buddah's, too! Now I'll be thinking of how much the Mars bar is enjoying it, when I eat one. Hee hee.
I wish I could taste one now !!!
I can feelthat caramel; yum
As others have already responded--yum!
Happy Thanksgiving to all those who are celebrating!
When it comes to chocolate(or caramel, provided it has chocolate attached to it somewhere) I have no guilt any more--the other, I never had guilt. ;_)
Oh, yes!
I hope someone brings a large plate of caramels to your Thanksgiving feast! Enjoy!
Caramel is SO good!!! I agree, Luarie, Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours!!
Yummy....I wouldn't have much guilt with this one..well, that is until I stepped on the scales...lol
A secret love, a secret lover, very suggestive secret passion here, Laurie! Well done.
K
Be still my heart! You chose to write about the candy, syrup, ice cream, pie, cake, etc. I simply cannot resist! Give me caramel or give me (caramel) death!
What a fine line is drawn between a secret love of sweets, and a secret lover! Perhaps we all unconsciously identify one with the other... But are all too guilty to admit it. :)
Yummy!
Yum! I can TASTE this poem.
They say that chocolate and other sweets release endorphins. Reading your poem (and Mosk's!), I'd have to agree!
yummy!
♥
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