Wednesday, January 16, 2013

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Measure me luscious,
                                    not dismal;
                                                        the longer, the better
                                                                                           no waffling, just lots of butter please.


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Poem inspirations:
3WW- dismal, luscious, waffle
Poetic Asides- A "measured" poem

17 comments:

Brian Miller said...

hahahaha you dont want to know where this poem took me....just saying....oh my....lol....

anthonynorth said...

Cheeky but tasty. Nice one :-)

Sheilagh Lee said...

Deliciously naughty.

jaerose said...

Mm measure me luscious..what a satisfying thought on a chilly evening..fine words..

Green Speck said...

Wow ... this tastes good ;-)

Stan Ski said...

Naughty... but nice...!

Jazzbumpa said...

I think I know where this took Brian.
At least I think I saw him there

Yum!
And I don't think you need the please at the end.


Cheers!
JzB

Kim Nelson said...

Brevity becomes you!

Anna :o] said...

Naughty - but nice!

Anna :o]

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I like how you string out those lines, sort of like spreading butter on...something...

Susie Clevenger said...

Whew! Now that says a lot with such few words! Thanks for buying my book!! Hope you like it!

oldegg said...

You certainly took your readers on a tempting ride today.

Altonian said...

That's a very sexy piece about a bread-stick - isn't it??

Emma Major said...

oh how naughty :)

ninotaziz said...

Hhmmm...

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Laurie! Butter? Who would have thought!

gabrielle said...

Julia would approve...