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hahahaha you dont want to know where this poem took me....just saying....oh my....lol....
Cheeky but tasty. Nice one :-)
Deliciously naughty.
Mm measure me luscious..what a satisfying thought on a chilly evening..fine words..
Wow ... this tastes good ;-)
Naughty... but nice...!
I think I know where this took Brian.At least I think I saw him thereYum!And I don't think you need the please at the end.Cheers!JzB
Brevity becomes you!
Naughty - but nice!Anna :o]
I like how you string out those lines, sort of like spreading butter on...something...
Whew! Now that says a lot with such few words! Thanks for buying my book!! Hope you like it!
You certainly took your readers on a tempting ride today.
That's a very sexy piece about a bread-stick - isn't it??
oh how naughty :)
Hhmmm...
Laurie! Butter? Who would have thought!
Julia would approve...
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hahahaha you dont want to know where this poem took me....just saying....oh my....lol....
Cheeky but tasty. Nice one :-)
Deliciously naughty.
Mm measure me luscious..what a satisfying thought on a chilly evening..fine words..
Wow ... this tastes good ;-)
Naughty... but nice...!
I think I know where this took Brian.
At least I think I saw him there
Yum!
And I don't think you need the please at the end.
Cheers!
JzB
Brevity becomes you!
Naughty - but nice!
Anna :o]
I like how you string out those lines, sort of like spreading butter on...something...
Whew! Now that says a lot with such few words! Thanks for buying my book!! Hope you like it!
You certainly took your readers on a tempting ride today.
That's a very sexy piece about a bread-stick - isn't it??
oh how naughty :)
Hhmmm...
Laurie! Butter? Who would have thought!
Julia would approve...
Post a Comment