Wednesday, January 9, 2013

WOW!

WOW
paid me a visit
in the form of
AH-HA,
a stealthy
OOH
and wondrous
AAHH,
without an
UH-OH
or a negative
TSK
no up and down looks
nor judgemental hiss;
just WOW
by itself
as I rambled along,
took note of the day
with my glasses on.

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Imaginary Gardens- Ella's Edge: Wow

20 comments:

Brian Miller said...

good to have the glasses on...eyes open...makes it a little easier for WOW to find you...smiles....fun read laurie

Susan said...

That is just the best wow of all!

Helen said...

Wonderful! You took WOW to another level, higher and higher.

Ella said...

I love your clever take and I so know the difference between glasses on and glasses off! Wow, no dust with glasses off, lol ;D
I love your wow!

Green Speck said...

You made WOW WOW-er :-)

Kerry O'Connor said...

Haha! I love those closing lines! You captured the essence of interjections very well - they are of the moment, but quickly fade.

sreeja harikrishnan said...

A woww from me... Wonderful!

manicddaily said...

very charming!

Herotomost said...

That last line killed me, I loved it. It would be hard to have an AHAH moment without them..lol. Well, maybe not, I just think that ending was very cool. Great take on the prompt.

Rebelle said...

I like this to pieces!

Rebelle said...

I like this to pieces!

Kim Nelson said...

LOL! Your teasing the oft-used phrases, and your less-than-perfect vision gave me a nice little morning giggle. Thanks, Laurie.

Loredana Donovan said...

The last line is wonderful both literally and metaphorically. It made me smile, thanks :)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love this so much! So true, how much clearer the world looks with glasses on.

Marian said...

yeah, if you really, really look.

Eva Gallant said...

I definitely want to be wearing my glasses when the WOW happens!

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Wow, baby, that was fun!

Mama Zen said...

This is so creative! I enjoyed it, Laurie.

Peggy said...

I enjoyed how you played with the various expressions and sounds. Nice!

Susie Clevenger said...

Glasses...yes it makes it clearer...there are occasions I like to still wear rose colored ones. :)