Friday, April 27, 2012

The Trouble Is In the Water

Photo by L. Kolp
Murky placebos spiral
‘round and ‘round
ripple through summer
a pulsating guise
of one-upmanship
keeping score
in waves of monomania
like a piranha
that feeds on money~
Sea World
Galveston Island~
slurp, slurp


©laurie kolp

Prompt inspiration: PA- The Trouble is _____


Eva Gallant said...

"like a piranha that feeds on money" I like that description!

Brian Miller said...

wicked cool flow through just a cool word...sea world, def costs...unless you are a resident...we had season passes once...$45, not bad....but there is def money to be made...

teri said...

Looks like you whirled through your writers malaise(I seem to remember seeing you say that this morning on facebook--- I could be dreaming.) I really like this prompt and may need to look into it. Your photo is magnificent.

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Big smile for this one - thanks!

Mary said...

I hear the 'ka-ching.'