Monday, April 16, 2012

The Covenant

The sun's rays, like arms
reaching out to you,
sprinkles diamonds
on the water's clear blue

sky, the stars that shine
on a cloudless night-
a twinkle in your eyes
and I know I'll be alright.
©laurie kolp

Prompt inspiration- NaPoWriMo, Day 16


Heaven said...

I like these lines:

sprinkles diamonds
on the water's clear blue

Lovely share ~

Buddah Moskowitz said...

This was simply beautiful. Thanks.

Eva Gallant said...


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Brian Miller said...

smiles....lovely capture of the beauty of that shimmer on the water...and then tying it to what you see in their eyes...yeah its gonna be alright...smiles.

Patricia Anne McGoldrick said...

I, too, have seen such diamonds!
Cheers for that twinkle at day's end.:)

Fred Rutherford said...

very lovely indeed. Beautifully penned. thanks

The Unknowngnome said...

Very very nice! "Lovely" seems to be the concensus and I agree. Very lovely!

Sorry Gnat said...

Your words are enchanting! i'm subscribing to your blog!