The sun's rays, like arms
reaching out to you,
sprinkles diamonds
on the water's clear blue
sky, the stars that shine
on a cloudless night-
a twinkle in your eyes
and I know I'll be alright.
~~
©laurie kolp
Prompt inspiration- NaPoWriMo, Day 16
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7 comments:
I like these lines:
sprinkles diamonds
on the water's clear blue
Lovely share ~
This was simply beautiful. Thanks.
smiles....lovely capture of the beauty of that shimmer on the water...and then tying it to what you see in their eyes...yeah its gonna be alright...smiles.
I, too, have seen such diamonds!
Cheers for that twinkle at day's end.:)
very lovely indeed. Beautifully penned. thanks
Very very nice! "Lovely" seems to be the concensus and I agree. Very lovely!
Your words are enchanting! i'm subscribing to your blog!
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