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| House At Dusk, 1935, Edward Hopper |
Ramble down the accordian path
past the window where I sit
past the lamppost
past the House of Hopper.
Perambulate into the woods, wait
past dusk, my love. I'll meet you there.
A plethora of pleasure will come.
©laurie kolp
Picture inspiration: The Mag 119
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36 comments:
well who could resist a plethora of pleasure....smiles....perambulate, wow you have such nice words too...lol...nice laurie....
What a not-so-nice but delightful ending. :)
I love the purposeful plan you've created. May all your pleasures evolve. Lovely, Laurie. =D Thanks.
very clever twist on the image
Loved that last line!
discontent
A pleasurable plan - I know it will work! :)
Nice repetition and rhyme. Someone can look forward to being loved to death I think!
Beautiful, seductive words.
I like where this one is going! :)
Like this. It's spare and lean. Hopper would have liked it too.
What an invitation :)
Niceeeeeee!
I debated about the path, I am glad you used it! Nice- thanks.
This one sings..the p's and r's reverberating like an accordion..like hurried footsteps..on that path..Jae
I often feel love at dusk, thanks, Laurie, good one.
very good, loved the past/future contrast with 'past' throughout ending with what will come.
very good, loved the past/future contrast with 'past' throughout ending with what will come.
Nice use of alliteration, too.
How beautiful is this? It has the feel of a moment in a classical novel.
William and Kate come to mind .. I like this!!
"a plethora of pleasure". Cool!
Love the alliteration in this piece! Sounds like a wonderful walk to be on.
Nice alliteration but naughty thoughts! Love it!
I hope she waited
love the phrase "Ramble down the accordian path..." love can be a bumpy road.
I like the last line a lot ~
Happy day to you ~
Loving your "p," alliteration and your take on that picture so fun!!
A plethora of pleasure...what a promise. Great work!
Beautiful!
Any poem that has the word perambulate and it doesn't get in the way ahas to be an Awesome poem!!!!! Perfectly done. Had the royal naughtiness sewn right in.
I've never perambulated into the woods, but you have made me eager to try...
I like the "accordion path". I need to find me a "plethora of pleasure". Uh-huh.
I especially like the accordion path...
Promises, promises...
How very formal and royal...nicely done!
love the list of things the lover is to pass: lampposts, hopper house, dusk...
the things we must walk through to reach the beloved.
This is a wonderful capture in words of the picture Laurie! Beautiful writing! :-)
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