Wednesday, May 16, 2012

NAANI (nanny, boo-boo)

when wavelengths collide
navigate like a demure fawn,
juggle thoughts until
harmony rings peace

©laurie kolp

Prompt inspirations:
3WW- fawn, navigate, juggle
Poetic Bloomings- NAANI Poetic Form- “expression of one and all” 4 lines, 20 to 25 syllables, nontitled (usually)

11 comments:

Daydreamertoo said...

Said it all in such a short piece :)

Brian Miller said...

in the cacophony find peace...often the wavelengths will collide...maybe i drop too much in juggling...i like the second line...well done short laurie...

Sheilagh Lee said...

beautiful

Eva Gallant said...

You have an amazing ability to navigate your way through so many different poetic forms!

Marita Abraham said...

this sort of reminds me of the cackle of a parrot i once heard that suddenly quietened down as it laid its eyes on me.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Very beautiful! Especially the demure fawn and "harmony rings peace".

jaerose said...

A clang and then a calm..like mopping up a grazed knee..although of course..much much more..Jae

Mariya Koleva said...

a great short poem! "collide" and then "ring peace" :-)

Berowne said...

Beautifully summed up - when wavelengths collide.

Hannah said...

I love the first two lines, Laurie, and to pair demure with fawn...perfect combo!! :)

Bethe77 said...

This is what I have been seeking these past few weeks.
Lovely expression put perfectly to the words of the day!
Blessings