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| Touch of Evil |
a touch of evil
bares his fists,
twists the truth
glares down,
frowns at others
who try and stop him
unaware each hit
pounds to size
his own demise
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@laurie kolp
Picture inspiration- Mag 123
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33 comments:
wow well done
I really like the last stanza ~
Great take Laurie ~
live by the sword, die by the sword...the top is the place clearest for the head shot....smiles...nice laurie
ahint of truth there, Laurie. Deliciously dark.
yep- well put!
"...unaware each hit
pounds to size
his own demise"
Wow, how much truth in those words! Concise and perfect lesson here. Loved this, Laurie!
strong lines... love it!
JJRod'z
Pounds to size his own demise...I like the way that tumbles off the tongue...
Blowing this philosophy up to include the world is scary but so truthful. Thank you for sharing this brilliantly crafted write, Laurie. =D
Yes indeed. You and I seem to have gone the 'bully' route :)
Nice one Laurie.
Again it's sad how people bully others just because they can and treat them as so. this was a tough one for me. You seem to have done well.
total yes - you go poet
rapier clean and to the point -- yes, yes... nice Laurie...
Good take. The picture just screams "evil".
wow
that is so philosophically right on
done for
Even this villain will meet his match..won't he be surprised! Well done...
You can see the muscle working in his jaw! thanks.
Perfect response.
So true, Laurie!!! Your ending is so well said!!
A pithy little powm, and a pretty good summary of the actual film! My contribution this week is here.
*poem
Deep, full of great insights.
I love this!
Well isn't this the truth ...
"unaware each hit
pounds to size
his own demise"
A very nice poem, that sings so clearly too!
Pithy, poetic, perfect.
Thanks, el Mosk
Succinctly splendid!
=)
Excellent take on the prompt...
Cracking little write - packed a little but true punch!
"once down the dark path you start, forever shall it dominate your destiny " - Yoda. Thanks Laurie
Very good poem!
Wander
Succinct and punches hard. Much like.
Ah, and all for Karma!
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