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| image by Daniel Murtagh Picture prompt- The Mag 150 |
her eyes said,
come with me
my love
his eyes said,
let thy bosom
be my resting place
they compromised
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| image by Daniel Murtagh Picture prompt- The Mag 150 |
30 comments:
A most lovely compromise, indeed!
Love how you got to the essence of the photo ... she does have that come hither look.
ha...compromise is not a bad thing at all...smiles...though i rather like her desire, i think it best for both...
Perfect, not a word to spare! Is the man's face ever turned toward the camera in these moments? Maybe in movies . . .
Terse, succinct and beautifully expressed...
Ha. Ha. Ha. Nice work!
A most suitable compromise.
That's really very clever, and the whole oddity of male-female relationships in a nutshell.
That sort of compromise is good for everyone! thanks-
travelling without moving
Simple but speaking volumes.
wonderfully written-
Love how you concluded this! Nice turn!
Really lovely Laurie!
Delicious!
Anna :o]
...and the man was HAPPY!
Ha!Wonderful!
Cleverly done Laurie, that way no-one was disappointed!
Really the heart of the matter..perfect...lovely...
Sweet.
Love it!!
perfect
That is so sweet and gentle, captures the picture beautifully.
..they compromised in a sacred communion, i guess...and your usage of 'thy' is perfect to represent your voice here...it adds elegance to your poem Laurie...smiles...
This is the soul of wit. Excellent poem.
It's all about compromise :) Nice!
Excellently captured, Laurie!
the start to a great relationship!
A naughty compromise??
A grand bargain!
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