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I love shorter poems with prompts. It takes more skill to include the three words here and you managed it brilliantly.
Yes - this is a strong piece. You have a created a great smooth flow.
As effortless as hoisting the main-sail..Jae ;)
Hey folks! This sort of stuff is easy - just ask Laurie Kolp.
I very impressed with your use of the words in such a short poem. Beautiful and I love that last line!
Thanks = )
Good thinking, and I love the acrostic message too!
you can just see the Captain at the helm
Beautifully stated, and in so few well - used words!
Not only the 3WW, but each word at the end of the line... wow. Very nicely done. I can see the Captain too, but what about Tenille? LOL. Amyhttp://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/06/09/sorry-plus-two-new-ones/
I love the "fond thoughts falling with ashes." Beautiful poem.
this is impressive. you used the words the well and the acrostic form is just lovely.
smooth and nicely done. Flow is great.
I love hearing from all of you... thank you!
Ya, I'm all about quick. Nice job. Again nothing wasted and everything said. Superb.
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I love shorter poems with prompts. It takes more skill to include the three words here and you managed it brilliantly.
Yes - this is a strong piece. You have a created a great smooth flow.
As effortless as hoisting the main-sail..Jae ;)
Hey folks! This sort of stuff is easy - just ask Laurie Kolp.
I very impressed with your use of the words in such a short poem. Beautiful and I love that last line!
Thanks = )
Good thinking, and I love the acrostic message too!
you can just see the Captain at the helm
Beautifully stated, and in so few well - used words!
Not only the 3WW, but each word at the end of the line... wow. Very nicely done. I can see the Captain too, but what about Tenille? LOL. Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/06/09/sorry-plus-two-new-ones/
I love the "fond thoughts falling with ashes." Beautiful poem.
this is impressive. you used the words the well and the acrostic form is just lovely.
smooth and nicely done. Flow is great.
I love hearing from all of you... thank you!
Ya, I'm all about quick. Nice job. Again nothing wasted and everything said. Superb.
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