Friday, June 3, 2011

Sizzling Hot

hazy
lazy
dazy
fun
laying
playing
in the sun
cool
pool
fool
run
burning
yearning
two as one

@laurie kolp

Prompt inspiration: One Stop Poetry- The sun

11 comments:

Hope said...

truly delightful!

wonderful write!

Connie Peters said...

Very cool! Or should I say hot?

Brian Miller said...

smiles. this has a fun cadence to it...we have stayed at the pool this week and after day 1 invested in better sun screen...

Claudia said...

nice - i like the rhythm you build up with your words...cool pool fool...lovely..

Eric 'Bubba' Alder said...

Reminds me of the old Nat King Cole song: "Roll out those lazy, hazy, crazy days of summer..."

Victoria said...

Enjoyed the flow of this a lot. It felt like a warm summer day.

Aguilar Elliot said...

Can I jump inside your poem? It sounds like a good place to be.

Henry Clemmons said...

You are so kool, Laurie. I so love your voice! It was like reading sunshine.

bumfuzzled said...

good work. :) hope you had as much fun writing this one as I did reading it :)

bummy / monty

Quotes,Photos and a little Poetry said...

super fun and cute.

Dave King said...

Wonderful, those lines are all I have the breath for at the moment - and all that is needed: they get the job done admirably.