Thursday, June 16, 2011

Barriers: A Tanka



One brick at a time
I watched you slipping away
Through the underbrush--
Your herculean wall block
My dynamite will knock down.


@laurie kolp
Prompt inspiration: Theme Thursday

7 comments:

Steve Isaak said...

Good, direct write.

sweet pea. said...

ooh.
sounds menacing, almost.

upinthecosmos said...

Powerful write:-)

annell said...

I like what you did with the brick! And thanks for coming to my new site.

Karen said...

Whoa! Very primal. I read it three times, getting a different visual each time. Wonderful!

beccagivens said...

great knitting of words ~~

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

I liked that a lot. Wonderful tanka!