*Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Barriers: A Tanka

Thursday, June 16, 2011

Barriers: A Tanka

One brick at a time
I watched you slipping away
Through the underbrush--
Your herculean wall block
My dynamite will knock down.

@laurie kolp
Prompt inspiration: Theme Thursday

7 comments:

Steve Isaak said...: Good, direct write.; June 16, 2011 at 8:23 PM
sweet pea. said...: ooh.
sounds menacing, almost.; June 16, 2011 at 8:50 PM
Unknown said...: Powerful write:-); June 16, 2011 at 10:09 PM
annell4 said...: I like what you did with the brick! And thanks for coming to my new site.; June 17, 2011 at 8:39 AM
Karen said...: Whoa! Very primal. I read it three times, getting a different visual each time. Wonderful!; June 17, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Anonymous said...: great knitting of words ~~; June 19, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Madeleine Begun Kane said...: I liked that a lot. Wonderful tanka!; June 20, 2011 at 1:05 AM

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