to be Reproduced, 1937
by the Belgian surrealist René
Pic prompt courtesy of The Mag 161
You reproduced our vows,
and try to seek forgiveness now?
The lies you left behind
tattooed within my mind,
written on the face you hid
in another woman's bed.
Your image just an echo,
a double-vision foe.
All I want to see
as you walk away from me
is the back of your greasy head.
whew strong words....
your image just an echo...nice..
and ugh, yeah i think seeing them walking away is not such a bad thing with that kind of betrayal...
Reproduction of vows, sad that it has come to this ~ Best to see the back of his greasy head ~ Good one Laurie ~
Powerful words from the heart.
He ought to be told the feel of things. The stronger the better! Nicely Laurie!
Vigorous and compelling; quite effecive...
Curly, greasy head! great tone- especially at the end!
yes it is a memorable head in the picture -
Well, that's telling him, and no mistake! Great write.
I could feel the anger in the words! Best to get rid of a greasy head anyway!
Whoa! This is so powerful. Intense. Have read it thrice already. :D
Sounds pretty permanent to me...good to see such strength! Another greasy head...gone!
My sentiments ... exactly!!!
yowch! Bye bye is right!
The pain you design is so effective then thankfully you release us with that just-enough-dis that imprints a grin.
You put it to that shampoo-dodger good and well!
Oh, so good - love the strength and power in this one!
Captures a hurt and embues a shame. Nice spin on the prompt.
...and he shall count himself lucky she doesn't take a frying pan to his greasy head as well! Shame, shame is his middle name! Bravo- I felt the surge of strength pull in each line! To the finish of him!
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