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In barren pool of gray
she casts aside all
worry but a shield
against conception
that with enchantment
from above
spells intense results.
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Poetic Inspiration~
3WW: barren, intense, worry
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23 comments:
When you cast aside those worries, and look for, and accept, that guidance, the results can certainly be powerful and intense!
Short and sweet!
Ah, I think enchantment from above is key!
Ah yes, I sense the bittersweet touch of spells!
Pity those who in their unawareness do not recognize that enchanting power from "out there" and never experience of God's intense love.
Pray for them.
What's the need to worry when we are full of faith and convinced of Providential support?...I like your use of 'enchantment' and 'spells' in the lines..a lovely write :)
Love that enchantment from above!
Your poem is a sweet reminder that enchantment can come from above.
I like the simplicity of this. A message in a few lines. Nice write.
There is something magical and your words are full of enchantment.
very nice line breaks in this....it really works especially in the casting aside all//worry being a shield...giving each line a meaning all its own, and together yet another...
there is something about the picture that seems to fit so perfectly with your words (or is it the other way around?). hmm...
an enjoyable read.
"enchantment from above" goes a long way to cast away worry. Lovely thought, nicely penned.
seeking for up above, we all have our hopes with the one who resides above
Enchantment from above, Providence's help can never be denied. Always there for the asking! Nice lines Laurie!
Hank
There is a calming enchantment in faith...
Laurie,
I think the best magic of all, arrives with us as gifts from above. Faith often returns such belief..
Eileen
"Barren pool of grey"
Just lovely
profound, absolutely magical
Magic
Enchantment, and that spells wonder :-)
Well I hope the results are good and magical too ~ Have a good weekend Laurie ~
Oh, how lovely, Laurie. A sense of wonder here and the peace that passes our understanding...
Perfect work in image and poem -indeed 'The Power is Above'
Letting ourselves appreciate the bounties of providence and nature will allow their magic to work upon us...
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