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There's a lot going on in this poem and the more I read it the more I see.
That was a wonderful poem. :) I love the photo of the cardinal too.
An excellently done take on the prompt.
I love the connotations of Cattyville. Nice.
Yikes. Strong message, Laurie.
Nicely done!Shape Poems
We've all been at the wrong end of judgemental eyes. Not a good place to be.
What's wrong with Martin? Cattyville is a fun place to be (sometimes).
Yeah, not crazy about Catty-ville, either.Terrific magpie, Laurie.
Well I've known a few women like this in my lifetime!!!
Oooh, that's eerie. The picture freaks me out.
Really good. I like the repetition.
Cool take on the prompt.LisaInspiredbyLisa
We can never hide the judgement in our eyes even if we try not to be catty. Interesting form with repetition, like it.
..short but very well expressed... i enjoyed the read...thanks.~Kelvin
Excellent. I have known a few folk like this too!Anna :o]
I have about three people I could send this to. Great job. You nailed it.
I've seen Cattyville! Nifty piece!
Very original, Laurie. I've seen that rolling, judging orb beat a few people up over in Cattyville. Sly. Good job!
I love the way you play with the words. Great magpie!
This is very clever. I like it very much =)
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There's a lot going on in this poem and the more I read it the more I see.
That was a wonderful poem. :) I love the photo of the cardinal too.
An excellently done take on the prompt.
I love the connotations of Cattyville. Nice.
Yikes. Strong message, Laurie.
Nicely done!
Shape Poems
We've all been at the wrong end of judgemental eyes. Not a good place to be.
What's wrong with Martin? Cattyville is a fun place to be (sometimes).
Yeah, not crazy about Catty-ville, either.
Terrific magpie, Laurie.
Well I've known a few women like this in my lifetime!!!
Oooh, that's eerie. The picture freaks me out.
Really good. I like the repetition.
Cool take on the prompt.
Lisa
InspiredbyLisa
We can never hide the judgement in our eyes even if we try not to be catty. Interesting form with repetition, like it.
..short but very well expressed... i enjoyed the read...thanks.
~Kelvin
Excellent. I have known a few folk like this too!
Anna :o]
I have about three people I could send this to. Great job. You nailed it.
I've seen Cattyville! Nifty piece!
Very original, Laurie. I've seen that rolling, judging orb beat a few people up over in Cattyville. Sly. Good job!
I love the way you play with the words. Great magpie!
This is very clever. I like it very much =)
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