Feel the wispy barbs as they
Ease across your tender
Arm like a make-up brush
Teasing little girls who
Hope they won't get caught
Emulating models with cheeks as
Red as a cardinal
@laurie kolp
Prompt inspiration: Poets United Thursday Think Tank- Feather
ARCHIVES.....FIRST DRAFTS.....
12 comments:
Thanks for the first morning smile.
Lovely Laurie! An appropriate read for my day, as my granddaughter is with me and she's playing dress-up!
PERFECT!
nice laurie...love the feel of a feather on the skin...and the playfulness there in the end as well...
:-) My youngest is pretty much out of the dress up stage (just make up now), but I can remember finding red and purple fake boa feathers all over the house.
I could feel those bristles on my skin and see that blush. Excellent!
Laurie, this is magical! I love each line and the end took my breath away! :D I love your poem...going to read it again~
Laurie - you are clever! So nice and smart...gave me a smile when I needed it most.
Cool
"cheeks as red as a cardinal". Lovely! Hey, have I only just now noticed the changed look of your blog? I love your header photo......it looks great in here!
Nice acrostic:)
This is great, really good content, fantastic closing image and an acrostic to boot!
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