when wavelengths collide
navigate like a demure fawn,
juggle thoughts until
harmony rings peace
3WW- fawn, navigate, juggle
Poetic Bloomings- NAANI Poetic Form- “expression of one and all” 4 lines, 20 to 25 syllables, nontitled (usually)
Said it all in such a short piece :)
in the cacophony find peace...often the wavelengths will collide...maybe i drop too much in juggling...i like the second line...well done short laurie...
You have an amazing ability to navigate your way through so many different poetic forms!
this sort of reminds me of the cackle of a parrot i once heard that suddenly quietened down as it laid its eyes on me.
Very beautiful! Especially the demure fawn and "harmony rings peace".
A clang and then a calm..like mopping up a grazed knee..although of course..much much more..Jae
a great short poem! "collide" and then "ring peace" :-)
Beautifully summed up - when wavelengths collide.
I love the first two lines, Laurie, and to pair demure with fawn...perfect combo!! :)
This is what I have been seeking these past few weeks.
Lovely expression put perfectly to the words of the day!
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