Solar flare
illuminates the room
every time I see your vibrant smile
shining forth
this aureole of you
burning with desire my aching heart
ever since
your light refused to reach
the depths of my darkened soul. I long
to see your
rays beaming once again
illuminating the room with cheer.
@laurie kolp
Prompt inspirations:
Poets United Thursday Think Tank- Light
Poetic Bloomings- Form: Parallelogram de Crystalline
ARCHIVES.....FIRST DRAFTS.....
18 comments:
Laurie
I love the impact of your illuminated words
Gorgeous and so filled with soul
Wow you really dida wonderful job
With the prompt
One's love does have a way of lighting up a room!
Very deep, and so poignant.The longing for the withheld light.
Lovely ! :)
"This aureole of you" is a lovely phrase! Really beautiful!
Laurie,
I love this poem for both the sadness and the passion.
Eileen
This is one of the most pleasing and lyrical forms. You did it justice, laurie. Warm, open, honest, light.
Very cool
So well expressed, Laurie. Brava!!
smiles...love being around those that def light up the room...and those that light up my life...
Heartfelt and dripping with longing!
Very much I go for this. It resonated with me throughout.
That is a good wish indeed.
gorgeous and spiritual.
what a tremendous element of yearning you have splashed into this piece about light. really well done.
I like the use of light here to illuminate the depths of regret, excellent Laurie!
It is, indeed, heartbreaking when someone's light won't reach us. This was beautifully done.
The longing that lingers- wishing you well.
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