Sunday, October 30, 2011

Skip Dessert

me there
I will
pounce on you
a cat
clawing, hiss.
I feel your tongue
tease me
creamy pie;
urge to

@laurie kolp

I can't believe you have such a dirty mind! Come on now...  pies, dieting...

Prompt inspiration: Imaginary Garden with Real Toads where Kerry challenged us to try out the Waltz Wave form.


Kay L. Davies said...

Oh, yes, pie.
And cake.
And cookies.
That's the only kind of cheating I do.

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

Liz Rice-Sosne said...

Laurie ... you have just discovered a new diet. The Poet's Diet. Every time you wish to cheat; write a poem. I love it.

kaykuala said...

Hissing and clawing! Gosh! He would'nt dare to cheat. Powerful verse!


Kerry O'Connor said...

I guess this is all about cheating on one's diet... I can relate!
I'm glad you gave this form a go - it has a great energetic flow.

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

LOL! I like it.

Linda H. said...

Like you would even need to diet!!! You're funny. Love this poem.

Unknown said...

I'm afraid I have a dirty mind! lol

Jacqueline Howett said...

Cute! I wish I had some pie right now!

Lolamouse said...

Oh,right, pie, of course! I knew that's what you were talking about! Now pardon me while I get a cold glass of water (to wash down the pie!)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

So clever. And now I want pie.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

But the other is some much fun! And no, possibly even negative, calories.

Mary said...

Dirty mind you? Never!!
Dirty mind me? Never!!
Wonderful write? Yes! For sure.