Some images just say it all, Laurie. I think I've been in this movie. Not an unneeded word here--perfect.
Perfection! A love story laid bare (no pun intended, hee hee)
An excellent analogy.
What a nice way to leave a trail of clothes too :)Very romantic. 'nuff said. ;)
I followed the trail all the way to a wide smile. What a blessing!
Oh Laurie, this is gorgeous- love the simile!They still make it- that's great! :-)
hehe....sounds like it was a wonderful evening....smiles..
Nice stuff, Laurie. Can't let the fire go out. Thanks for being part of FBF!
Lovely. Who would have thought drugstore glasses could be sexy :)
Brief, direct, luscious, just like a trail of clothes should be. Great write.
Love the brevity, Laurie...makes the piece all the more distinct and impacting. :)
Lovely words !!!
New wine in old glasses - fab drink. Thanks.
A heartfelt applause from me, Laurie. This says so much in five lines.
Love, Senior Style ~~~ oh, how delightful!!
... the way of passion! :)
Slam---out' the ballpark, girl!You know how I love tiny poems that really hit hard. The trail of glasses makes it clear that this is a long-term, cohabitating relationship. And the fact that there is still a trail of clothing, after a number of years perhaps, is a very good sign that they have kept the passion alive. Bravo to them and to you. ;)
Love this Laurie....a perfect poetic description of love through the years. :-)
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