I like it, Laurie. You can't ignore a cardinal ..... OR a person flouncing away!
Like me in my red hat?!
nice...begs for more...maybe that is just my storyteller gene...i want to know more...smiles.
This is delightful ... you left me with a smile this morning!
Nice one, Laurie!
Vivid! Love it...
True. You want to be noticed? Get a red umbrella!
Beautiful, like the cardinal.
Yes, one who carries a red umbrella (or flounces, for that matter-- what a fantastic word!) must want to get noticed.
Love it!Anna :o]
Well tamped poetics, Laurie.Red cardinals have always beenon of my favorite birds, but I'ma sucker for red convertiblestoo. Never did get a red umbrella,but have several red ball caps,and I have perfected a wickedflounce.
Short and sweet. I really enjoyed it.
super brilliant lines.
"Flounce" is a lovely word in a neat little poem(Cad . . I've told you before - your hat is orange not red.)
I love the bit about the cardinal...perhaps a double meaning?
Thanks everyone. Have a wonderful day!
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