Refrigerate
your anxious need
to sugarcoat the situation;
I'm devoted to helping you
through this phase of life.
through this phase of life.
I sleep on ice
while you sweat,
watch your weakened body
melt away as scrawny legs
freeze up, refuse to move
without assistance.
I'm here.
*
Prompt Inspiration:
3WW~ anxious, devoted, scrawny
26 comments:
Thanks for being there for her. Lovely poem.
Withdrawal is such a powerful title..although sad there is a great amount of determination and strength in these words..sugar coating can definitely waste valuable time it's almost as if you demonstrate this in the paring down of words
You are in a difficult position there, Laurie; but I am sure you are handling it with grace. I am guessing Presence right now is her greatest need.
This made me cry, beautiful compassion, loving commitment. Exceptional words.
it reminded me of my own Three Word Missive...best of luck in these daunting times. Beautifully done! www.cebelina.blogspot.com Anxious, Devoted, Scrawny
I am sure your mom appreciates your unfaltering presence and love, Laurie. Thinking of you during these difficult times.
i luv the thought of someone being there for the personae in need; there is love in this poem
thanks for stopping by my blog
have a nice Wednesday
much love...
and being there matters, you know...that we set aside our own comfort for another...it is noble...and having you there matters.....know that.
aw you're there for them that's the most important thing
I'm with Brian - you are noble. It is often hard for the one being cared for to accept the situation, so used are they to being the caregivers......as Mary says, your Presence is such a huge gift. The "I'm here" so loving and strong. You shine, kiddo - know that, even if all you feel right now is tired beyond belief.
Such actions earn you a front row seat in Heaven. Good, reassuring poem.
Wishing you much strength as you need it.
You used your difficult time to create something quite beautiful here. Hugs and carry on.
support is one of the great gifts.. you wrote a great poem.. full of this gift...
i love your wording
Its a lovely way to say about how we thrive for others life
uplifting and inspiring lines.....
love this strength and commitment.
It's one sacrifice for the other. It's a noble thing. Nicely Laurie!
Hank
When you 'go there' deep in your pain, I am reminded of the years I watched as my mom wasted, faded away. Stay strong, Laurie. This is powerful.
stellar and oh so thoughtful
Sad and yet inspiring.
Sad and yet inspiring.
I like what you did here and your choice of words was super.
Ciao
Pea
Laurie, those first 3 lines are so perfect, it's hardest but best to face it without the sugar coating. Let's you speak from the heart. Much love and empathy for you and your mom. PS loved that photo of your son running through the frosty air
You nailed it!
Nice play on the theme. I enjoyed this a lot.
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