Mingling in the wreckage
of past malfunctions,
they gather ubiquitously;
people with nothing
in common
except
the tumultuous warfare
growing in their psyche.
@laurie kolp
Prompt inspiration and photo courtesy of Magpie Tales Monday
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24 comments:
You have captured well the essense... great imagery within your words.
excellent take on the image
You have handled the prompt so well! Nailed it!
Quite rightly so! When they have nothing in common, it was pandemonium.
amazing the way people attract each other just like themselves.
Way to sum it up!
..short and simple yet very neat and very well expressed.. great write.
~Kelvin
Insightful and incisive! I like it.
Great perspective. Well done.
Excellent response to the prompt picture.
— K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
This is marvelous! Thank you for this!
People with nothing in common, blind to each other's humanity. Like your take on the prompt.
Yes, well done!
Also, thanks so much for your fun contribution to this week's Limerick-Off!
This is wonderful Laurie - I see what you see - yet I saw something completely different!
Anna :o]
You've illustrated the struggle well.
'past malfunctions' ... conjures up all sorts of thoughts!
I enjoyed this, Laurie.
My two closests friends and I share very little in common; however, our differences are what attract each of us to the other.
Tumultuous warfare growing... Great diction and imagery!
I love this one. Feels like you're describing the whole world.
yes, nothing but so much in common--well done-c
A wonderfully provocative read!
Oh wow Laurie, this is a strong poem I love it!
I think I have worked there :)
Is why I chose to write now.
Very excellent.
Very thoughtfully written - jam packed with energy!
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