Misery lies within the hollow depths of nothingness
a spiraling void wrought through shallow minds
obsessing on circumstantial myths
(what-if next year my lover leaps from a cliff?)
leading to complete hysteria
in a bottomless pit
while the present moment flies away
a dove in search of inner peace.
Prompt inspiration: 3WW (hollow, misery, shallow)
Deep and powerful words. Excellently done.
I agree, no good living life on 'what if's' when tomorrow may not even arrive, let alone next year...LOL
Nicely said once again Laurie!
That's where I went too, Laurie, that this is actually funny, a depiction of foolishness, a foolishness I have actually worn myself, but wear no longer. I am amused from that position.
Nicely done Laurie.
Ditto to what everyone else said...wonderfully done!
These words certainly did not inspire cheerful poetry, did they? However, a dove in search of inner peace sounds good!
gripping right from the beginning to the end
weel-written and true, I often betray the moment by worrying about
Well said Laurie.
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