I like your spare use of words to express the imagery in this poem, almost like a haiku. And I also enjoyed your interview on poetic bloomings and was really interested by the concept of "small stones" - I assume this is one of them.
I like this! You've packed a lot in this acrostic poem, and I especially liked the comparison to a summer cold. I had a roof job to do today here in south Georgia--you described my day with accuracy!
Laurie, great take on the 3WW prompt. To the point... appropriate because, when you are suffering a summer cold, there's not much else to say. Hope you are better soon, hon. Amy http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/07/09/city-summer-3ww-and-poets-united-interview/
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I like your spare use of words to express the imagery in this poem, almost like a haiku. And I also enjoyed your interview on poetic bloomings and was really interested by the concept of "small stones" - I assume this is one of them.
i felt like that before. few words with lots of imagery
beautiful imagery.
I felt my lungs tighten.
A great quick blast of experience here.
When weather matches mood..sometimes you don't know if the discomfort is inside or out..you made this feel stickily claustrophobic..Jae
Great images. You have a flair for description and emotion. It gets difficult to tell where one ends and the other begins. I like that. Very good.
Temperature extremes really are the pits. You have captured heat very well indeed.
Phew! Know what you mean - we had 44C plus the other day; getting there again today too.
I like this! You've packed a lot in this acrostic poem, and I especially liked the comparison to a summer cold. I had a roof job to do today here in south Georgia--you described my day with accuracy!
and thus i am off to the pool to cut that HEAT...ha
I love that last line. This is really fantastic Laurie
Laurie, great take on the 3WW prompt. To the point... appropriate because, when you are suffering a summer cold, there's not much else to say. Hope you are better soon, hon. Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/07/09/city-summer-3ww-and-poets-united-interview/
Terrific construction. Laurie.
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