Saturday, July 30, 2011

Cooling Seduction

Whitecaps run parallel lines
to Mother Ocean's shore
I lie supine
sweet seduction
for salty tongue
to make its way
up steamy legs
teasing tastes
from ankle
to knee
to thigh
to hip
until I know she's done;
I watch her turn back
and head home.

@laurie kolp

Prompt inspiration: dVerse Poetics w/ Sheila Moore


Christine said...

I can just feel those waves against me, you captured this well.

Scarlet said...

Seductive, she is.

Lovely ~

Anonymous said...

Goodness, that is some very frisky water!


duane f said...

Your words conjued up images of seduction

hedgewitch said...

Not sure if I feel cooler or a bit steamier, but definitely a refreshing write.

Brian Miller said...

oh yes...take me...haha...very sensual feel to this wish i was near the coast right now...

Arron Shilling said...

Wow! If contact occurs im expecting steam.

A hot write.

Daydreamertoo said...

Phew... sweltering and, I don't mean the heat either!
Very, very sensual, a lovely play on words.

Unknown said...

We were going to visit Cocoa Beach, but our plans fell through. Now, I want to go more than ever. Lovely and playful write :)

Sheila said...

Ok what ocean is that??? I want to go! Love the tempting scene you painted here. Nice one, laurie :)

Anonymous said...

Whitecaps run parallel lines
to Mother Ocean's shore
I lie supine
sweet seduction

Great invitation in these opening lines. In land locked Colorado I am missing the ocean.

Anonymous said...

Sexy! Nicely done :)

Anonymous said...

Wow! Very nicely done.

Unknown said...

That got my blood boiling! Great portrait of the seductive tide!

Anonymous said...

Well crafted. I've heard of waves lapping at the shore, but this is a new take on it!

Maude Lynn said...

Gorgeous write!

The Zen of Gavin said...

Excellent... the passion building... you can view my gatha on the ocean here:

Raining water

Tashtoo said...

The pull of the tide...the mystery, the power, the force...a lovely write indeed! Imagining it now, and feeling the cool!

vivinfrance said...

Without those first two lines, the sensual takes over completely! A very very well written poem.

kaykuala said...

The waves can be awe inspiring and the tides are a living phenomena.