Well, that one packs a punch!
Too many worms make for one unappealing (a-peel-ing?) apple!
Quite deep with very good images for me.
I love short, interesting poems like this.
This turns that old myth into a big, poetic re-think! Food for thought - without the worms, though."Self-will the intercoursesubjugating all morality."Powerful material, Laurie. Amy
a powerful response to the prompt...love these lines:and I become the apple; it, the wormdigging a hell pathin my God consciousnesshappy sunday~
digging a hell path in my god concious...whew that is a tremendous line...very visual and powerful...very nice...
There never was anything more enticing than, temptation. Lovely!
My apple is somewhat different...lol
Oh my! Strong, powerful words - excellent!Anna :o]
I agree! This is powerful! Awesome imagery!
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