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from the sky
an iridescent phone booth's
alluring aura
a magnetic coax
neon lit charismatic charm
drew the curious man
the inner depths
gateway to a cosmic land
to enter; risky
@laurie kolp
Prompt inspiration: The Mag 105
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35 comments:
Very nice, Laurie!
And what is inside..........?
More, please.
:)
Giving me something to imagine of what is inside... Something wonderful i know...
JJRod'z
How cool is that photo.....and how creative is that take on it. Risky plus mysterious makes for a wonderful adventure sometimes. Very cool.
I originally only had the first haiku, but added the second and third... what do you think?
Love this ... beam me up!!!
I think I'd take the chance.....I'm a sucker for neon!
life is a risk though isnt it? smiles...sounds like quite the adventure....
Sci-fi rules, OK?
Beam me up Scottie! I like the trio.
great si fi
meditation station
Love this, Laurie! I was also very intriqued by the lavender glow. Really enjoyed the way you described it:
"an iridescent phone booth's
alluring aura
a magnetic coax
neon lit charismatic charm"
~Shawna
rosemarymint.wordpress.com
All three work well together. I like how the haiku's share a linked story. Risky business for sure. Thank you for sharing, Laurie.
Eerie, in a Twilight Zone kind of way!
Risky indeed, but in life sometimes one MUST take risks.
Dr. Who would love this!
Very cute--there is definitely that Martian quality. K.
Time travel...one never knows. :) I like this.
For me this works equally well as three individual haiku or a poem of three verses.
Superb!
I'd DEFINITELY take a chance!
:)
I'm glad he took the chance...Jupiter and beyond?? Great..
Lead me to a cosmic land! :)
Yeah they were never lit up like that huh? a bit of a spaceship there!
thanks.
Oh let's risk it! Love this Laurie!
so do we answer or not?...ET-esque
phone home
Peace
this is a good one Laurie...thanks for sharing
It might have been a wrong number . . just a thought.
Risky indeed! Fine words!
Anna :o]
You can feel how hard it is for him to resist. I like ‘alluring aura’ and the three haiku together work really well, with just a that little question mark hanging - whether he took the risk or not.
Like your Si Fi take on the photo Laurie....awesome! :-)
Nice tanka. I love the "magnetic coax".
I think I'd be answering that call!
Very cool take on the photo prompt...I love your words!
thanks for this lovely reminder. ;)
Yes, magnetic coax, indeed...
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